EPISODE TWO has been released...
..And I would much appreciate feedback, cheers.
Rhys.
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Ok. I feel like I'm n my own in saying this but I couldn't sit through the entire show. I listened to half of it and i'm afraid i had to turn it off.
Now i'm not here just to slag you off i want to give some constructive criticism, which you can choose to accept or not.
- It sounds like you haven't rehearsed your show in advance. There are certain things that throw you, which shouldn't. One example when you couldn't pronounce the word 'Cruciate'.
- You also sputter alot, huge hesitations in getting some words out, often in the middle of a sentence, which is like watching Ross in an episode of Friends and is quite frankly....erm...you know...annoying. It sounds like nervousness again, it all leads to sounding like you haven't rehearsed.
- It feels like I'm listening to some random BBC programme back in the 1930's where everything is spoken without much enthusiasm, and read from a sheet with a stiff upper lip. It doesn't sound like you're enjoying yourself and that makes it tedious and very difficult to listen to.
- Finally it sounds like you need to research some more issues if you are going to report on it. Such as the problems with the Heineken Cup as far as the English and French sides are concerned and where you (on air) state, "I don't understand it to be honest." and move on to say "Anyway..." It sounded very amateurish and not very knowledgeable.
I hope I haven't offended you too much wtih that, i don't want any of this to be taken personally, it was just my views on why I couldn't enjoy the show.